Kai Frantum
Wednesday, July 13, 2011
Is this any good (3 sentences, 1 paragraph)?
Sounds good. I would make it reproductive offspring or fertile offspring. Also, I would get rid of "suited to the direction of this essay" and fix the "so too did" which sound really awkward in the 3rd sentence.
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